JUST ONE 80



JUST one 80

by Gp Pradeep
"Just eighty allowed, no more than that"she whispered near his ears
"What? my car's limit? "
"No u idiot, words, we hav just 80 words. .......please be quick"
Sweat poured his neck. he pressed accelerator hard, the car gained speed as if reading his mind.
"but i hav a lot to say......"
"twenty eight,twenty eight"
"twenty eight?"
"twenty two"
"Cant we extend the limit please"
"sorry,thirteen more"
"my heart always kno......"
"Seven"
"But"
"five"
"idea.....!"
"two"
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"i love you"


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  1. UnknownMarch 31, 2013 at 10:57 AM

    //explanation:
    gf :"you exceeded by one"
    bf:"i didn't, you and i are one and i win"

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